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    dots Submission Name: Cold in the Officedots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCold in the Officedots
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    Head has been swimming,
    yesterday I ws driving and I couldn't tell if I was moving, my foot was on the break but I saw myself moving forward
    into thought before I woke up.



    Akwardly I have th ewondering blues, I wander.

    Thinking of a scripture right now and makeing a puzzle with a friend.
    For these are the plans I have for you says Yahweh.

    Expected end.

    Unexpectedly.




    Submitted on 2011-09-19 15:42:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Do you believe God is omniscient ? I believe he gave us free will so that we might surprise him . I know perhaps this is grandiose delusional but it just feels right .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-09-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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