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    dots Submission Name: Long Forgotten Memorydots

    Author: eden1931
    ASL Info:    18, Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0/2/10
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsLong Forgotten Memorydots

    A two story house
    Beautiful and white
    Sitting on the corner of a caldasac
    In the deep of heart of Richmond

    My mom, my brother, and I
    Stayed in the beautiful house
    For a time
    Having now here else to go

    My momís friend was kind
    Her son was a brat
    We liked it there
    Expect when the brat took our food

    We had little money
    Little where else to go
    The white house was a haven
    Little did we know it would turn into a hell

    I awake
    To light red and blue
    I peer out my window
    Dogs were attacking the back yard

    I walked out the front
    My feet were cooled by the white gravel
    As I went through the gate to the back yard
    Momís friend was crying

    My mom was yelling at her in shock
    The cops were putting the brat in hand cups
    And the earth that the dogs attacked
    Was now over turned

    A white sheet covered someone
    Someone that was sleeping
    Sleeping in their own blood
    Caked in fresh earth

    I was only four then
    Now I am seventeen
    I now understand fully
    That person wasnít sleeping

    That was their final resting place
    They werenít sleeping
    Their life was taken by the brat
    And now the brat was going to spend the rest of his life in jail

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      wow it very powerful , but is this real life did it happan? let me know and check out some of mine.
    | Posted on 2011-09-20 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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