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    dots Submission Name: More Powerdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMore Powerdots
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    these are processes I desire
    want to maintain
    senses of
    gratitude
    for the sake of

    nicely brain-washed and fresh coats of painted songs

    lies
    simply chosing to believe
    that there is no greener grass
    no,
    there is this lovely seed in my hand
    and a magic bean




    Submitted on 2011-09-20 13:00:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you know what --- whenever I read your poems --- I feel BOOM (blows my mind off :))

    This is just another BOOM ... a very satisfying BOOM

    I feel to say this:

    I wish I could levitate the beanstalk, and make you dreamwalk :)
    | Posted on 2011-09-23 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      You've always had a rather entrancing way of stitching words together. This piece is no exception.

    It's very you; this voice of yours, I mean.

    Your ending was whimsical and uplifting.

    | Posted on 2011-09-21 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]


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