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    Author: coloredstone
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 99/60/37
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsDeathdots
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    Death be big
    Death be small
    Death be the song that takes them all

    Death be bitter
    Death be sweet
    Death steps by a soul's own beat

    Death be quiet
    Death be loud
    Death overcomes both weak and proud

    Death be blooming
    Death be slick
    Death be true but

    Life is a trick




    Submitted on 2011-09-21 04:32:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      jack be nimble, jack be quick, jack jump over the
    casket....

    we only borrow life and it is fleeting...bitter tastes only last a short time, sweet tastes just as short--
    whatever our size, whatever our beat

    life is short whether or not it is sweet.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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