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    dots Submission Name: Beautydots
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    Author: coloredstone
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    dotsBeautydots
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    Beauty is a radiance--
    Nestled deep and rooted strong.
    And the body is but a bulb
    That only with a spark within
    Flickers, and begins to glow.




    Submitted on 2011-09-21 04:34:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      weirdly enough, i don't see auras, but i feel in color as well as feel the color of others. if that makes sense.

    i believe that beauty does radiate from within, and pours outwards, because it must. i don't know if just a body can contain it when it is truly there. and it's not always there. not with me anyway. i have my ugly hardened heart moments that even i wish i could squash once i recognize them. but gosh, when i, or anyone else for that matter, is full of this lovely beautiful glowing light, one can't help but be attracted to it and be part of it in some way.

    | Posted on 2011-11-23 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      Very pretty... I'm learning how resiliently fragile the body is this year... your poem is dead-on. It's the light within that gives our glass figures a glow.
    | Posted on 2011-11-20 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      turn my switch, turn me on from the inside...beauty and love come from the inside...

    some bulbs give off a beautiful light, but it is only temporary...and if there is not a beauty on the inside, the glow is ephemeral....

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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