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    dots Submission Name: Forgotten dots
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    Author: Midnight_Toker
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 13/232/500
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsForgotten dots
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    Nobody knows..
    and NOBODY cares,

    the truth is cold..
    bitter and unfair,

    NOONE is spared..
    no mercy is shown,

    YOU'LL DIE LIKE THE REST..
    rotting flesh and bone,

    an anonymous grave..
    just another tombstone,

    a LONG forgotten ROTTEN shell..thats'been left to decompose...

    NOBODY cares...
    NOBODY knows.








    Submitted on 2011-09-21 19:11:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem made me connect with the a stark , part of life....Faith, my mother-mentor said put it this way...."We are both significant and insignificant at the same time" . For me the poem is a snap shot of how it feels to consider this. Then again, it also reminds me of the flip side...sometimes the real tragedy comes from never fully knowing how much one has mattered. Thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2011-09-24 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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