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    Author: earl8403
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    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    a lonely night
    cavern of deathly darkness
    opaque moonlight
    beams show the way
    to dying and trapped miners

    the morning air
    caresses her light hair
    pleasantly
    surprised at the tatoo
    with each motion of the hip




    Submitted on 2011-09-22 14:33:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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