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    dots Submission Name: Ready to bloomdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 413
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    Take me inside this dream,

    I am ready to bloom on this world,
    to bind the rings of destiny with the sun
    and spill colour from my chest
    to help others fly
    when tarnish bites their wings.

    Wake me upon this earth,

    so I can swirl my aura
    into the hat of names,
    ready to be called upon,
    ready to cleanse ancient nails
    and cracked smiles
    from the veins of this world,
    unafraid to love and embrace
    each face as my own.

    Place my plume atop the hearts of man and child,
    to be carried and weaved into their needs,

    I am ready...

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2011-09-22 16:03:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this one, Shawn.
    It's very pure and (he)artful.
    And that's all I need to say.
    | Posted on 2011-09-23 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]
      "into the hat of names"
    smart line..with the rest of the piece..talking about aura, destiny and color of life...

    i am a person of many faces...i have to decide which one is really me.

    the dream/earth thing..yes...make my dreams real...in them i know who i am and what i want...now make them real.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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