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    dots Submission Name: My wet Best Friend..dots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1078
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    Description:
       A personal conclusion I came up with after being comforted by my tears..


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    dotsMy wet Best Friend..dots
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    you never seem to fail me
    you always appear at the right time
    no matter how hard the situation be
    no one but you give me strength to climb
    I'm not ashamed of you because you're dear
    I'm more relaxed with every fallen tear
    crying you my best friend because you care




    Submitted on 2011-09-23 04:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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