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My wet Best Friend..


Author: YoungKaizen
ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4 /6 /19
Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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A personal conclusion I came up with after being comforted by my tears..


My wet Best Friend..


you never seem to fail me
you always appear at the right time
no matter how hard the situation be
no one but you give me strength to climb
I'm not ashamed of you because you're dear
I'm more relaxed with every fallen tear
crying you my best friend because you care




Submitted on 2011-09-23 04:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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