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    dots Submission Name: Puppy-Lovedots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 433
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    dotsPuppy-Lovedots
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    Cream lace confessions
    languidly drift
    to repose.
    And
    with a puckered up pose
    offer a kiss
    to the tip of your nose.
    Glissading at sail
    over wavelets of grass,
    bouquet of puppy love
    wriggling free
    from your clasp.
    Eliciting giggles
    with stumbling
    travails
    all of the time
    merrily wiggling his tail.




    Submitted on 2011-09-24 05:04:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think BlueMonk said what needs to be said. ~C
    | Posted on 2011-10-14 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute indeed. This shows the range of your versatility when compared to the somewhat darker side writes. Seemingly simple, it too is composed and constructed in a beautiful fashion of words that become art to exhibit such a composition as the English language is capable of. But then you already know I'm a fan.
    | Posted on 2011-09-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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