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    dots Submission Name: Greeting graydots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 368
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    dotsGreeting graydots
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    Truth will spill through this earth
    like magma, like death
    and old understandings
    we rooted to our bones
    with tears and moans.
    ... Let jaws relax
    to receive the water
    of knowing and trust,
    let righteous winds
    blow over your reaching arms
    and the sky will touch down
    to nourish each dream
    planted in grey...




    Submitted on 2011-09-24 14:22:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      truth will fall like rain...and when the skies get gray..inevitably...rain will fall....

    it will soak us...will we let it? will we be ready, or will we stay in denial and wear protection to keep it from hurting us...from penetrating...

    we do that sometimes...but sooner or later...when we aren't ready...it will fall on us and we will be saturated with realizations.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Is this not a Spielberg film?
    I guess I could be thinking of
    a dream I had where E.T. meets
    Godzilla.

    Think about it receive the water of knowing.
    The Greys? The truth is out there.

    We have always known we are not
    alone.

    Godzilla breathing fire.
    Old understanding rooted in our bones.
    Hidden within the earth.

    The correlation of farraginous
    elements are obvious.
    If this is not the basis of a Spielberg
    film it should be.

    | Posted on 2011-09-24 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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