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    dots Submission Name: Wasted Years dots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Broken
    Total Views: 665
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       This is an overall assessment of my life in America.. Atleast thats how I feel right now...


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    dotsWasted Years dots
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    they said you're young, you got time
    I thought I was trying too hard
    they said you got your parents help
    I thought I was rushing to be independent
    they said you could always make up in life
    I thought I had wasted my time
    they thought they were helping me
    I said I should have done what my heart told me
    sometimes in life you might be the only one who sees what's infront of you.. you're never to old to recive advice but you're never to young to make up your own mind..




    Submitted on 2011-09-24 17:54:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AMEN. I love the message. It's easy to give advice..but it takes guts to walk our paths honestly, mindfully, and fully aware that no matter how old or young we are...we are always learning, growing and refining. When students ask me what they should major in...I always ask them what they are passionate about...start there...everything follows from that point. Making the decision to trust ourselves is sometimes the hardest first step.

    Your poem reminds me that "Time is Now"

    I look forward to reading more from you.

    Namaste,
    | Posted on 2011-09-25 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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