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    dots Submission Name: Something Stupid by C. Carson Parks dots

    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I love this so much.

    I could not resist posting this. This is a gem by C. Carson Parks, and immortalized by Frank and Nancy Sinatra. Later on, the same was re-immortalized by Nicole and Robbie.

    I wish that everyone who hasn't read or heard this does so

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    dotsSomething Stupid by C. Carson Parks dots

    I know I stand in line
    Until you think you have the time
    To spend an evening with me
    And if we go someplace to dance
    I know that there's a chance
    You won't be leaving with me

    Then afterwards we drop into a quiet little place
    And have a drink or two
    And then I go and spoil it all
    By saying something stupid
    Like I love you

    I can see it in your eyes
    That you despise the same old lines
    You heard the night before
    And though it's just a line to you
    For me it's true
    And never seemed so right before

    I practice every day to find some clever
    lines to say
    To make the meaning come through
    But then I think I'll wait until the evening
    gets late
    And I'm alone with you

    The time is right
    Your perfume fills my head
    The stars get red
    And oh the night's so blue
    And then I go and spoil it all
    By saying something stupid
    Like I love you
    I love you...

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