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    dots Submission Name: The Crucifixion.dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Crucifixion.dots
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    The Crucifixion:

    The Deed is Done.
    His Death His Signature.
    The Ink His Blood.

    The Blood His Life’s Ink
    The New Testament wrote in His Blood.
    His Testimony to the Faithful
    The enlightened Selected few.

    Who knew?

    Who are those?

    Contemplate!

    I hear a sound shiller than all music
    Calling me from the Beyond.
    I have lived well.

    I knew!

    Amen!




    Submitted on 2011-09-27 07:17:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The ink in the blood! I like that line and yes Jesus is the truth, the way, and the light. A very spiritual poem :)

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-09-28 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen! When traveled the world spiritually speaking one comes inevitably back time again face to face with the ultimate truth, light and way. In Jesus there is no lie, only life.
    | Posted on 2011-09-27 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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