Description: So i like to think that im not bipolar or anything like that but this could contradict that idea. but really this is more me organizing my thoughts and putting the arguing ideas that live inside my head into a physical form, wouldnt really say this is poetry, just a way for me to comfort myself.
MAKE THE VOICES STOP!!! -------------------------------------------
I CAN'T DO THIS!
Yes you can
All I do is cry and wail
And wish I had the courage to bail
But thatís what makes you courageous
That you have the will and strength to push through
But I don't even know if I want this
All it causes is stress and distress
That's not true
Every day you learn something new
But what if I fail
What's going to happen
You're going to move back home
With your mother?
And do what?
Is that really so bad?
But you're not going to fail
Or even falter
But people will laugh and judge
Say I knew she couldn't do it
She tries to be so smart
Trying to get a head start
But she's no better than the rest of us
Who are you talking about??
Who do you know that would say such cruel things?
If anything they would sympathize with you
And encourage you to go back and finish what you started
The people you surround yourself by love you
With all their heart
And want nothing more than for you to do the best that you can
And whoever you think would say such things
Those opinions matter nothing
For when you accomplish everything
You can laugh in their faces
Now get off your pitty stand
Pick you self up
Dust off the tear
Wipe off the dirt and your negative pessimistic idea
And get to work
Put aside all your bad thoughts and
Continue where you left off
Because sitting here arguing and pulling yourself
Into a dark hole
Of ominous ideas
Is going to get you nowhere
And you have grand things to accomplish
So go forth and be great
hey and hi good write words to live by if it doesnt kill you it will only make you stronger and sometimes we have to fail to succeed
the voices could be your conscience trying to guide tou or lead you astray
I really really liked this, there was a bit of spelling error's that could be fixed just to make it smoother, but all in all I think this is such a hard/ yet interesting place to be.
I think everyone feels this when starting new things, steping out on a new path for the first time.
I like how you resolved it, and that the light won over the dark thoughts.
It's true, hard work pays off, and sitting around worrying about "what might happen" does nothing but waste time, heck, you could have tried and failed and already been on a new path in the time it took to worry and be afraid!! :):)