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    dots Submission Name: In the Wilddots
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    Author: EEKS
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    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIn the Wilddots
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    I miss the woods.
    In the summer, I was a wild thing,
    breathing with trees,
    winged and furious.
    Now my back is twisted into curious
    shapes like crooked letters
    and angry signs
    from sleeping on harsh floorboards,
    and beds that are not mine.
    I miss the soft silent echo
    of wind in my ears.
    You will never hear me apologizing
    for my sins against humans
    but I am sorry for leaving you.
    I am sorry I left you.
    I will be back soon.




    Submitted on 2011-09-27 16:33:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow I really like this, it made me nostalgic with memories of living in nature :) Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-09-28 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this image: " I was a wild thing
    breathing with trees,
    winged and furious

    I can see, I can hear it and I can feel it. This poem gives the reader an experience.

    Thank you for sharing this.

    Namaste,

    EW
    | Posted on 2011-09-27 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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