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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Love is the storngest emomation any creature can feel except for hate . But hate can hurt you. love, trust and friendshipsand all the other emotions humans value so much aer the only emotion that can bring pain. Only love break a heart into so may pieces. the greatest pain i've ever felt rode on the back of the love.i love hime and every injury he received seemed reflected onto me. his silence tore my heart and bled it dry and now i have used my love for him to push the blade in deeper.




    Submitted on 2011-09-27 18:50:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is it love, or the loss of love that causes so much pain? You effectively convey pain in your writing. Keep putting words to your feelings, keep writing and know that others will connect. You are not alone.

    Namaste,

    EW
    | Posted on 2011-09-27 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]
      Is it love, or the loss of love that causes so much pain? You effectively convey pain in your writing. Keep putting words to your feelings, keep writing and know that others will connect. You are not alone.

    Namaste,

    EW
    | Posted on 2011-09-27 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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