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    dots Submission Name: Tongue of Riddlesdots
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    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    27 Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 261/310/148
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 553
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    Description:
       something that came out of my twitter feed today..felt like returning to you with it after so much time away :)


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    dotsTongue of Riddlesdots
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    I think I thought a thought to think about;
    a simple thought to thrill no doubt
    In thinking thoughts I thought to seek
    somewhat feeble these thoughts may think.
    Still as summer nights fresh with hope
    Wild as the tempest of blizzarding snow
    Humbly these thoughts go thinking in merry figure eights,
    if only for this indulgent day.




    Submitted on 2011-09-28 15:46:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...as memories fly
    like ice that glistens
    above scores of travelers
    who rarely listen
    to the timbrels hidden
    in the winter sky
    we wave "hello"
    when we mean "goodbye"

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2014-11-04 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      clever write....the piece itself runs in a "figure eight" of sorts.....

    ~rubie
    | Posted on 2011-09-28 00:00:00 | by rubie | [ Reply to This ]
      A Catcher in a Rhyme! Nice! lol I like the beat to this very..enchanting :) I'm still digesting this rhythmic thought, which was written in such a poetic fashion.

    Fav* Definitely

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-09-28 00:00:00 | by AltheaLaochra | [ Reply to This ]
      catchy tune...like the near rhyme...and the play on words...

    look forward to reading more from you, i think!
    yes, that is my thought.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-28 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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