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    dots Submission Name: Senses ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance. Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles 2 Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


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    dotsSenses ~*~dots
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    Sounds in darkness
    Abound
    By other senses
    Found

    Stillness in chaos
    Sublime
    Stellar movement
    Divine

    Align
    Angelic octave
    Nature Song
    FloatINg along




    Submitted on 2011-09-28 19:14:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very peaceful write. I agree with Jim.

    I love how you use simple words, and are to the point, but still bring out a sense of freedom.

    | Posted on 2011-09-29 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      You always take me to a peaceful place - to cast my cares of the day away - and always to smile. Thank you, Tiffany.

    Jim
    | Posted on 2011-09-29 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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