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    dots Submission Name: Rapedots

    Author: blackendrose22
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I want beauty, I want
    to be seen
    no more invisible in
    this midnight scheme
    I unravels the bindings and let free
    not knowing its farewell to the being
    i once was.
    i grow weary from my choice of toxin
    once to rest i am disturbed by an eery feeling not a cure
    my screams are unheard
    my innocence ripped away
    the violation still stays
    passing out to a world
    of darkness as he had away with my vulnurability
    he had his way
    now my soul stays
    torn and betrayed

    Submitted on 2011-09-29 21:05:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am so sorry this happened to you. It takes courage to write and even more to share. You put words to feelings no one should know...ever. Thanks for sharing this.


    | Posted on 2011-09-29 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]

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