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    dots Submission Name: Love Poemdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLove Poemdots
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    i loved a heart imagined, breathing life to her sorrows and her joys
    placed a midnight campfire to warm her
    gave an unmoving home for her to employ

    there was a song playing
    caressing and kissing our melody
    the lyrics were unstated
    but you sang the words to me

    the sun has never been so kind
    the night stars, they were so at ease
    for the heart I had imagined
    was solely mine to please






    Submitted on 2011-09-30 12:14:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow .. This is so beautiful. Have you seen/read Howl's moving castle ? If so you will understand the connect for sure :)

    The sun has never been so kind
    the night stars, they were so at ease - these two lines are just gorgeous !!

    Cheers,
    AbsolutelyLost
    | Posted on 2011-09-30 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a delightful love poem, and is very comforting to read. Nice work!
    | Posted on 2011-09-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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