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    dots Submission Name: Loving Memorydots
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    Author: AmberZen
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    Sitting next to your bedside

    telling you I'll be okay

    Holding your hand, hearing your breathing

    but no response, your eyes gaze at the ceiling

    I wonder if it is angels you see

    ready to take you away

    a week without your voice

    but your lifeline still beating

    I'd kiss your cheek, leave the room

    Get in my car, and cry

    Leaving you was so hard

    every time. Saying goodbye

    the last was the hardest.

    Saturday morning, May 14

    "She's gone" and my heart sank


    My best friend, My mentor,

    Gone from this world?

    Forever, never to be heard?

    Never to be seen?

    Never to be hugged?

    It's too much for me still

    Months later, The loss

    It burns a place deep inside of me

    We all die, that's the truth

    But now I feel so alone

    I feel like no one cares

    Because you did so much

    I know no one could ever compare

    I remember your voice last

    " I love you baby, I don't want to leave you"

    And I cry still because i know

    You never wanted to leave

    but you had to. They carried you away

    The last time, I held your cold hand

    and I looked at your tight lips and face

    I could see your green eyes a little

    but there was no light anymore

    I did not feel you there at all

    The loss sank in that moment

    and my dad made me leave

    "you have to let go sometime"

    Grandma, I miss you every day

    The woman that raised me,

    Loved me, Gave me a home.

    I know that no amount of time is ever enough.

    People say it won't get better

    it just gets different.

    Why did I tell you I would be okay?

    that i would work my best to make our family happy.

    When all I do is fall to the ground

    I can't get back on me feet again without you

    Help me, Please help me up.

    There is a hollow and lonely place in my heart now

    I have to keep you alive in my memories

    I have to keep you alive in my soul

    The woman that made me and taugh me

    She's somewhere better now.

    I have to believe she's somewhere better.








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      Heartbreaking...I understand and can relate. I remember writing poems on my Dad's last day. I few years later, my teacher/mentor/mother of my adult life died as well. Your words, speak to the experience of losing someone who is simply beloved. It helps. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Peace and Namaste,
    EW
    | Posted on 2011-10-04 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]

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