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    dots Submission Name: Broken Wingsdots

    Author: wickedlady
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsBroken Wingsdots

    My wings collecting dust..
    This heart from tears shed begins to rust.
    You've stomped through my garden,
    the one in which my love for you once grew...
    I've run out of seeds to plants for you.

    You kiss my lips one day,
    beat me innocently with your words the next.
    With promises of faithful yet undying love you've kept me quiet.

    And after all thats been said and done it seems as if neither of us has won.

    I can't seem to break free of what once felt like heaven eternally caressing me.

    What can fly with broken wings?

    Submitted on 2011-10-03 11:35:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This reminds me of my relationship with my wife. or my soon to be exwife. At first it was awsome and some how it ended real bad. I spent ten years with her and had no clue when it went bad. I tried to leave many times but it never happened. This poem hit me pretty hard in the heart. it read beautifully and I really enjoyed it... thank you....

    | Posted on 2011-10-05 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]

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