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    dots Submission Name: R.I.P.dots

    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    There is a black cat
    with emerald eyes
    that rests on a white marble grave.
    It waves its tail from east to west
    over the epitaph that says:
    “Rest in peace!”

    Submitted on 2011-10-03 15:01:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't get it. lol. Although it interests me, could you explain?
    | Posted on 2011-10-11 00:00:00 | by IlakSorirn | [ Reply to This ]
      There was a black cat
    with his jet-black eyes
    who bombed Taj Mahal
    a dragons tail east to west
    above his epitaph that says:
    “Rest in peace you bastard!”

    A spoof (joke)
    | Posted on 2011-10-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Obama's poem.
    | Posted on 2011-10-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool image. I would love to know more about what inspired this piece. Any chance you would share?
    | Posted on 2011-10-05 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]

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