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"The Magic Of Autumn"

Author: Ron Cole
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"The Magic Of Autumn"

At night a mighty magician
has lent color to the trees
He's made a forest pallet
before the Winter's freeze.

He's changed the leafy forest
into brilliant blazing hues
and stilled the land at evening
with the hush of Autumn's clues.

Now numbered are the Summer's days;
now hushed are Summer winds;
now it's still within the Forest
as Autumn's chill begins.

Now timid forest creatures
busily gather stores
now the Oak Tree sheds it Acorns
from the branches they adorned.

It's harvest time again
and bales of hay abound
Pumpkins lend their color
wherever they are found.

It's a time of seasonal magic
with Fall stores and the Harvest Fair
It's a time when Autumn's magic
lends enchantment to the air!

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  I like autum..but my favorit season is spring....
but this poem makes me wish that winter would never come.....i like fall better!
| Posted on 2011-10-24 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
  A beautiful description of fall, with the THE MASTERS hand holding the brush, painting reds, gold and yeppow across the land. Thank you for sharing this picture RON, well done my friend.
| Posted on 2011-10-18 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel magic in your poetry. You have a knack of expressing nature's beauty. Have a wonderful Fall and enjoy to the heart's depth the Lord's beauty and His creation around us.
| Posted on 2011-10-09 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
  A wonderland write, "Now timid forest creatures" I like Why or As-" timid forest creatures" no problem, poe.
| Posted on 2011-10-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  i love autumn, love this poem and relate so much to it right now.

i live in the woods, pretty much all oaks...and there are several right over my house...the roof is constantly getting barraged with acorns the last two weeks...sounds like i am getting attacked by soldiers running around up there...

thanks for this

| Posted on 2011-10-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  Vivid! I really like the rhyming scheme, as well. Autumn inspires such imagination in artists. I wish you a very inspirational and happy autumn season, sir.
| Posted on 2011-10-04 00:00:00 | by moaxcym | [ Reply to This ]

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