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    dots Submission Name: Coming to Consciousness dots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    22/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 47/151/126
    Words: 351
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       NOT FINISHED...couldn't sleep so I had to write what I was thinking...more to come in the middle of some other night


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    In a world of incongruent exterior metaphysical apertures within a human’s mind, I find myself questioning what many find beyond their capacity, but may realize that some absurd queries are simply quite common. Though it may have taken me longer than others, I am in my last year of an epidemical college career, and I find myself choking painfully on the overcoming fear of a proposed life in the “real world” and the unknown that will be thrown onto me in just under seven months time. The flailing steps of failure and success I have taken throughout the past to gain a slight unsteady foothold on a future seem blatantly pointless through my scrutinizing eyes that judge and rip to pieces those who have preceded me in the pursuit of vocation after graduation. After years of revenue loss and emotional turmoil, the mentality of job security that will not be honored to me after completion of a degree creates a pained realization of defined dreams being crushed and stamped out, draining my inner core completely. Surprisingly, just today, consciousness enlightened my mind’s eye on my directed epistemological thoughts to allow my psyche to question and attempt to answer probable and possible difficult human natures. Allowing myself to be front and blunt in who I am, I will point out that those closest to me understand my quirk of tormenting myself with worry over either major personal issues or futile over thinking. Now taking into account that many believe that upsetting oneself over the idea of the unknown is an irrational fear, I propose that this apprehension towards the future, when it comes to being a human, is completely rational. Can Homo sapiens not connect on some level of thinking that there is the possibility of not knowing if an individual will have the opportunity to live to one’s full potential and enjoy a satisfying comfortable life? Doe this not hit some string within the body to realize that every individual either consciously or subconsciously has reservations about the unknown, consequently making it a rational thought within this specific species?




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      Happy day! Strong, deep, introspective & worthy of reading to study smiles to share ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-10-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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