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I am the path you are the journey travel me I am the chair you are tired I will hold you I am the bed you need rest I will comfort you I am the vessel you are water fill me |
I thought of God in this one, Jesus says I am the vessel. Not sure. Anyways thanks for sharing. | Posted on 2011-10-17 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ] | This is well-done. I like the congruity between the stanzas. If you wanted to make it sexier, you could say something about lying on the bed. | Good job, Amy | Posted on 2011-10-10 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ] | Happy day My Shadow ~*~ | This piece shows we look to another...is it us or the other... Thanks for sharINg IT smiles 2 share ;-) | Posted on 2011-10-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ] | |