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    dots Submission Name: What It Takes (Flarf)dots
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    Author: smartblond
    ASL Info:    18/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 97/114/33
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 392
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 606



    Description:
       If you don't know what Flarf poetry is then you should google it. It's actually a ton of fun to create.


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    dotsWhat It Takes (Flarf)dots
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    You betrayed me
    you can still make amends
    Our Hearts are still Beating
    the truth lies behind your loose eyes
    Pure and Healthy
    Home Food Health Medical Physicals
    Misuse of a sophisticated technology to affect our physical, emotional
    How can we protect ourselves?
    Please understand that I'm not trying to blame computer users
    They are looking for dirt
    They would run over to the woman
    But I do have the positive aspect
    Do you have a case?
    I've been thinking a lot lately about what it takes




    Submitted on 2011-10-05 19:50:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day! I don't know I understand Flarf but I appreciate your words and how we can positively or negatively effect those with our words!

    Hooray for trying new poetic ways....there are no rules and I say go for IT!

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    | Posted on 2011-10-05 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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