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    dots Submission Name: From Afardots
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    Author: EEKS
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    dotsFrom Afardots
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    Standing there I saw that there were people left who believe true things. I saw that not everyone has given themselves over mind and body to apathy and hopelessness and that some people found it in them to move and shake and sing and dance and scream and shout and I envied them that. I wanted to be a mover and a shaker, a dreamer of endless dreams. A believer. A true believer. And isn't that why we're in this? Don't we all want to believe in something? Don't we all need to find the things we thought were lost? I thought that was the point all along. We were searching.




    Submitted on 2011-10-06 23:42:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      saw, not very poetic.
    | Posted on 2011-10-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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