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    dots Submission Name: Circumlocutiondots
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    Author: JanePlane
    ASL Info:    125/F/everyplane
    Elite Ratio:    6.76 - 415/433/130
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Circumlocution

    We buzz around this beehive
    We seek the honey
    Yet we cry about the sting




    Submitted on 2011-10-07 17:18:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      taking things for granted? nice phrasing. to tell you the truth i really don't like hiaku senyru w/e's that much. still a good phrasing though.
    | Posted on 2011-11-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me of this:

    worker bees can leave
    even drones can fly away
    the queen is their slave
    | Posted on 2011-10-10 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
      I prefer a buzz to the burn
    said the happy-go-lucky
    drone who was spurned
    | Posted on 2011-10-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      in order to have happiness, we have to suffer some pain...there is a cost....

    some don't seem to realize this.


    well said.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-10-07 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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