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    dots Submission Name: pretenddots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 41/55/47
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/BrokenHeart
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    Its funny how hours seem like minutes
    but the weeks seem like years
    but then someone says they miss him...
    and it all just turns to tears.




    Submitted on 2011-10-10 09:04:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short, sweet and thought-provoking. I like it.
    | Posted on 2011-10-11 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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