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attention-seeking all the time, I a

Author: EshyFishy
ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
Elite Ratio:    6.89 - 126 /124 /57
Words: 37
Class/Type: Cheesy Joke /Childrens
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Bright and cheery one.

attention-seeking all the time, I a

Mistakes and regrets go hand in hand
And I have an apt for making things bad.

So when you need a screw up, you know who to call,
Just call me and I'll ruin it all!

Submitted on 2011-10-13 07:56:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I could be the chaos
that causes you harm

or the whispery touch
that clings to your arm

or I may be the twitch
of synaptic shock

that snaps all the shackles
and shatters the locks...
| Posted on 2013-03-22 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
| Posted on 2011-10-13 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
  and Charlie Brown thinks he's got it bad!
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