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    dots Submission Name: attention-seeking all the time, I adots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Childrens
    Total Views: 1073
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 197



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       Bright and cheery one.


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    dotsattention-seeking all the time, I adots
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    Mistakes and regrets go hand in hand
    And I have an apt for making things bad.

    So when you need a screw up, you know who to call,
    Just call me and I'll ruin it all!




    Submitted on 2011-10-13 07:56:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I could be the chaos
    that causes you harm

    or the whispery touch
    that clings to your arm

    or I may be the twitch
    of synaptic shock

    that snaps all the shackles
    and shatters the locks...
    | Posted on 2013-03-22 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Hectic..
    | Posted on 2011-10-13 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      and Charlie Brown thinks he's got it bad!
    | Posted on 2011-10-13 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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