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    dots Submission Name: day 2dots
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    Author: nobady
    ASL Info:    17/male\meh...
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/The pain inside
    Total Views: 296
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 604



    Description:
       anew update on my life, if annyone cares,
    idlike if someone cometed, if they feel, justabout as I do, it migt take som time to notice thow.


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    dotsday 2dots
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    update. (i know it has been a hvile, over 3 veeks no....)

    my life turning further even downhill, all trying to be nice, depressed me even more,
    that and the ordinary struggle to understand humans, and their range of emotions, and their instinct, I say that I am sad, they are also, I say I'm glad they react just weird, I still do not understand what to do in life, but only play with, maybe I once will get a reason,

    still feel hollow and empty. without knowing what might fill the void.

    am I by definition (except the physical? human??




    Submitted on 2011-10-13 14:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am still trying to figure out what it means to be human....so much pressure to be perfect...All I know is that humans are perfectly imperfect beings...hopefully trying to do their best.
    Thanks for sharing your words here.
    | Posted on 2011-10-18 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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