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    dots Submission Name: The word of womendots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       This is a man's world
    This is a man's world
    But it wouldn't be nothing
    Nothing without a woman or a girl


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    dotsThe word of womendots
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    there are men who are strong
    silly boys don't you know?
    there's a woman behind them
    letting them steal the show.

    The words of a woman
    can cut deep.
    when her words are as soft
    as the soles of her feet.

    But the words of a woman
    can bring a man to his knees
    let every emotion run
    vast as it is free.

    The words of a woman
    who stand proudly behind her man
    showing him grace
    at his every demand,

    can also bury him
    in uneven ground.
    the words of a woman
    can shoot a man down.

    The words of a woman
    are gentle but firm.
    to remind you men
    of our place in this world.

    Behind every great man
    they say is a great girl.
    but don't be fooled by
    a woman's sweet word.








    Submitted on 2011-10-17 16:50:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very important subject is being narrated in this poem. Woman is the creator of life and this world. Good work. Kudos.
    | Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      So true!

    Nice work Rachael!
    | Posted on 2011-10-19 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the idea of this poem: The strong man brought to his knees by the word of a woman. I want to know more about what's behind that....how does it happen? I know it's true because I watch it with my husband. Your observations are on target and you convey them effectively....perhaps a verse on how it is that a woman can do this? What is it about the relationship...about men and women? I am curious about the last line and what it meant to you? Thanks for sharing this. It made me think...
    PEACE
    EW
    | Posted on 2011-10-18 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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