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    dots Submission Name: Forshadowingdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 40/64/74
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Prose/
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       Just a thought that came to me.


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    dotsForshadowingdots
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    Agnostic bleeding, rather than field lightning turning events into such perspicuity.

    Contemplation is an ever founding noun. How man breathed that unforgiving hexagon.

    Instant blue skies malnourished in a flash.

    Misting its unnatural waters, and feasting with its own tinted flask.

    Lightly wavering in the eternally bliss breeze.




    Submitted on 2011-10-18 12:12:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The visual images are strong. The word perspicuity left me anticipating clarity...illumination of sorts...
    Contemplation...understanding and clarity
    Instant blue skies....clarity...that quickly disappears. This reminds me how we seek calrity, illumination, understanding...but it's elusive....at the whim of nature. We control nothing. Cool.
    | Posted on 2011-10-18 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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