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    dots Submission Name: You're my addictiondots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 784
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 667



    Description:
       Beginning of a thought of a song


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    dotsYou're my addictiondots
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    Canít seem to get enough of you (baby)
    ( Oo Whoa Oh)
    Youíre like a drug, drug
    I took the first hit
    And now
    I need some more
    My thoughts have been altered
    My thoughts have been skewed
    Iím only seeing through these rose colored glasses

    Iím under your hex,
    Under your spell
    Baby itís you,
    And baby,

    Youíre my addiction,
    The only, only thought,
    Running through my mind,
    Canít get, get enough,
    Youíre like a sugar rush,
    Taunting and teasing,
    Ooo Baby,
    Youíre, youíre my addiction(eon),
    Ooo Oh Oh Oh.




    Submitted on 2011-10-19 11:49:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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