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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    27/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 880/703/256
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 428
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    If I am forfeit then I am widow white,
    Hissing color and sizzling thunderbites -
    Coursing catastrophe and septic metal
    Through a gallery of mistaken identities,
    Chipped moments and defiled ideas.

    If I am forfeit then I am naked dawn,
    The primeval nature of virgin snows,
    Freckles and lashes and undisclosed
    Certainties in the quiet shade of trees
    Frantically rushing in this and that direction.

    If I am forfeit then I am shackle rust,
    I reverse not in age but in force, thus
    From dash into hurling clash through stratosphere
    I thrash, overthrowing foundations and hinges
    Off the doors of simulated principles.

    What am I, entirely?


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      Wow ... 2016. Haven't been on this site for ages. I remember sitting in Internet caffe's ... writing rhymes and loving your poems.

    How time flies by.
    And truth or lie
    Blend in the rain of moments.
    And space lets
    Future become past
    Much too fast.
    | Posted on 2016-06-04 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]
      Our ages are years apart so that I do not get or fully understand certain references. I know about Kindle but have never used it. Looked up thunderbytes. I used to know a lot more about marijuana than I do now. Nonetheless, as always, I am astounded by your images and ideas. What you are entirely, is a wonderful poet.
    | Posted on 2011-10-21 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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