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    dots Submission Name: A dangling Band of Dancersdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA dangling Band of Dancersdots

    I lay aside the question of coming here
    And, Arrive.
    I distance myself from the faces that I have seen that haunt me,
    the fears that have managed their ways into my dreams
    the nightmares that linger in the morning
    and manifest in rudess or anger or judgement
    or jealousy

    A creative imagination tackles the suggestions that entertain me
    a powerfully attentive source of busy-bodied gambling,
    fitted for my figure and taking its turn in the way I look at you

    This begs the mystery
    Innumerabl quadrants of space question the capacity of force that I occupy here in time
    Patience pushes her way through the crowd reminding me
    that this is all for the atmosphere

    Submitted on 2011-10-21 09:10:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day!

    I like how this piece I read, re-read, and re-re-read! How we interact, why we are here and what it can mean.

    Very thought provoking with smiles to share :-)
    | Posted on 2011-10-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i see the band of dancers as all my trepidations---

    loving you makes me nervous..but i am dealing with my past and gradually letting go the fears and embracing a feeling of patience.

    i really like "busy-bodied gambling"

    i gamble on love, but the busy bodies are the voices in my head warning me...

    i've done this...so i relate in this way...being with others like me...situations where neither of us can get out of our own way, to find the way to each other.

    i have a couple of suggestions:

    "the fears that have managed their way into my dreams"
    "innumerable quadrants"
    but a really good piece...

    i like "this is all for the atmosphere"

    like this all has to happen so i can dangle between letting go of the past and hanging onto it...grabbing onto you or letting you pass by me because i am too scared and scarred.

    just thoughts
    | Posted on 2011-10-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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