hi i really liked this your statement is true for so many people and their good and bad with their times with life
well done and i think you will touch a lot of people with these few words and for me that is what writing is about
well done once again
This speaks to me about my addictions that I need to face and conquer. That I can't really blame fully the environment I was raised in, but it still held some effect. I don't want my own to be shown such things but I can't control everything. Both helpless and responsible and it cripples me. wait oh um good poem kid.
This was very sad, it made me remember pain I've long since burried. i like how you coupled the stanza's. poetry does not NEED to rhyme and i enjoy it when i doesnt. it was a great read, thank you for sharing
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