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the bright lights

Author: PopRocksRae
ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232 /369 /355
Words: 100
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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the bright lights

take care of yourself my daughter.
You are so young yet.
There's more to this world
than you could ever forget.

Take care of your thoughts my daughters
there's not much you know.
The world can seem so vast
when there's still roads to go.

take care of your body my daughter
right now boys mean nothing
but one day they will and
they will say anything.

Take care of your heart my daughter
even when there's nobody in sight
you will understand one day
and not be fooled by the bright lights.

Submitted on 2011-10-22 13:37:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love the idea of a parent writing to a child. This heartfelt piece reminds me of how I vowed I would impart similar messages to my own daughter. Your poem conveys the wish to protect and empower. Your daughter will treasure it...just one little the second verse...did you intend to write "daughters" instead of "daughter"? This is a keeper!
| Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]

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