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    dots Submission Name: the bright lightsdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsthe bright lightsdots
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    take care of yourself my daughter.
    You are so young yet.
    There's more to this world
    than you could ever forget.


    Take care of your thoughts my daughters
    there's not much you know.
    The world can seem so vast
    when there's still roads to go.

    take care of your body my daughter
    right now boys mean nothing
    but one day they will and
    they will say anything.

    Take care of your heart my daughter
    even when there's nobody in sight
    you will understand one day
    and not be fooled by the bright lights.





    Submitted on 2011-10-22 13:37:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the idea of a parent writing to a child. This heartfelt piece reminds me of how I vowed I would impart similar messages to my own daughter. Your poem conveys the wish to protect and empower. Your daughter will treasure it...just one little thing...in the second verse...did you intend to write "daughters" instead of "daughter"? This is a keeper!
    | Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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