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    dots Submission Name: The Cricketsdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23/161/138
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Cricketsdots
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    When I look at your scars
    I see your story told
    And when I peer into your heart
    I see the part that's gold

    When you look at me
    Know your reflection
    Is true, the good in you
    Through unfiltered passion

    'Cause my eyes don't lie
    The beauty I see
    Knows all is good
    As you can be

    So leave your ghosts behind
    Let's start over together
    Be each other's strength
    Bringing out the better

    I'm not going anywhere
    And if you stay as well
    The dream won't have to end
    Endless stories to tell




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      Everyone brings some "baggage" with them to a new relationship. The trick is for both parties to be able to reconcile that baggage in order to make it work to an advantage....

    nice write!
    | Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by rubie | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this piece....no hidden agendas, no play on words...just a nice rhythmic feeling...i am here to stay...no matter what has happened to you before, trust me...i am here for the long haul...and i will take the bad with the good...

    reminds me lots of my second marriage...we both had been hurt so much before and felt such a lack of trust in love....takes much to overcome that. to "leave the ghosts behind"

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-10-23 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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