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    dots Submission Name: MOMENTS LIKE THESEdots
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    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    dotsMOMENTS LIKE THESEdots
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    ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHEN I FALL TO MY KNEES AND CRY FOR YOUR MERCY- FOR YOUR MERCY
    TO STRENGTHEN ME --- TO KEEP BELEIVING --- TO ENCOURAGE ME TO KEEP PRESSING ON -------TO REMIND ME THAT YOU MAKE ME STRONG
    OH --YES--- YES --- LORD YOU DO -------

    CHORUS:
    YOU BROKE THE CHAINS JESUS
    YOU BROKE THE CHAINS JESUS
    YES ----YOU BROKE THE CHAINS THAT WERE
    HOLDING ME BACK AND RESTRAINING ME FROM CHANGING
    FROM REPENTING FROM ALL MY SINS AND
    YOU CLEANSED ME --YOU WASHED ME ---YOU SET ME FREE----
    AND YOU GAVE ME YOUR HOLY SPIRIT TO KNOW YOUR ALWAYS NEAR AND I HAVE NOTHING TO FEAR-----


    OH--- YES ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE I BRING YOU MORE PRAISE WRAPED IN
    A HEART FELT SONG---
    OH ---AND ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHEN I FALL TO MY KNEES
    CRYING OUT FOR A TOUCH FROM YOU TO REMIND ME IN MOMENTS LIKE THESE
    TO WHOM I BELONG TO------

    REPEAT CHORUS :
    NOW LORD ----
    YOU HOLD THE KEYS TO EVERY ROOM INSIDE OF ME
    AND YOU KEEP SHOWING ME IN YOUR WORD
    THE TRUE WAY TO SELF DENYING OH---BUT ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHEN I NEED TO BE REMINDED REMINDED
    REPEAT CHORUS :




    Submitted on 2011-10-24 14:34:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love it, it's exactly the kind of song I needed to hear right now. You are very good at writing inspirational song!
    | Posted on 2011-10-27 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think your title is outstanding Jane! And the song is excellent, with honest passion and an ethereal message that we all need to hear...

    Congratulations on your good work!

    ps: you need to change the spelling to "Chorus" instead of Course.
    | Posted on 2011-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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