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    dots Submission Name: You are always rightdots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    22/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 222/196/163
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou are always rightdots
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    You were always right
    And you aren't stopping now

    You're right
    I am selfish
    I am annoying

    I am trying to change

    You're right
    You want to leave me
    And you have every reason to walk away

    You're right
    I never want to let go
    So I keep holding on tighter
    And pushing you further

    You're right

    But what you don't know is
    Maybe I am selfish
    Because you keep seeing past me

    Maybe I am selfish because
    to you I am invisible
    And some days that is not where I want to be

    Maybe I am annoying
    Because I don't want to be left alone
    Even though you say you want to

    But what you don't know is
    I am trying to change
    Are you?




    Submitted on 2011-10-25 21:44:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Universal truth! Just get the other person to read and understand. To be felt invisible is horrible, but it is often not the case that the other person doesn't care so much as the focus is on the trivia of the world instead of what one might feel should be able to be taken for granted, but shouldn't be.
    | Posted on 2011-10-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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