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You are always right

Author: blankscreen
ASL Info:    22/f/NY
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You are always right

You were always right
And you aren't stopping now

You're right
I am selfish
I am annoying

I am trying to change

You're right
You want to leave me
And you have every reason to walk away

You're right
I never want to let go
So I keep holding on tighter
And pushing you further

You're right

But what you don't know is
Maybe I am selfish
Because you keep seeing past me

Maybe I am selfish because
to you I am invisible
And some days that is not where I want to be

Maybe I am annoying
Because I don't want to be left alone
Even though you say you want to

But what you don't know is
I am trying to change
Are you?

Submitted on 2011-10-25 21:44:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Universal truth! Just get the other person to read and understand. To be felt invisible is horrible, but it is often not the case that the other person doesn't care so much as the focus is on the trivia of the world instead of what one might feel should be able to be taken for granted, but shouldn't be.
| Posted on 2011-10-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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