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    dots Submission Name: A Bangling Dand of Answersdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Bangling Dand of Answersdots
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    Twice,
    this repetive motion continues and I hang my head
    exhausted and awaiting relief

    Confirm with my mouth and actions that yes,
    indeed,
    this is where I stand

    My feet are planted
    Strength flows up from the energies in the heavens
    through my body

    And transforms into
    This Anger
    This Passion
    This respect for all things
    I am born to
    and holy of

    Mirrors reflect the distance,
    pressure corrupts my thoughts
    making way for the most fantastic sport of reaction

    I Stand
    and in this way I trust
    And my faith,
    is
    like its name




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      I get a real kick out of the fact that although you are of in on it loses you are nevertheless of in on it lives . This resembles my stand in so many ways .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-10-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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