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    Author: smartblond
    ASL Info:    18/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 97/114/33
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Always run with your head thrown forward
    Never look back

    Always think with your mind wide open.
    Give every thought an equal chance

    Always talk with your heart in communication with your head
    Allow for a balance of emotion and logic- too much of one or the other, and youíll get yourself in a real mess

    Always kiss with passion or never kiss at all
    Love should be given in full and not used to tease like a carrot dangling in front of a starving horse

    Always pray with sincerity
    Itís a waste of words if you donít believe anything will come of it

    Always dance with common sense.
    Have fun but ask yourself what or who you are really dancing for

    Always smile with all your effort
    Your cheeks should ache by the end of each day

    Always behave as you think you should
    Remember the lemmings

    Always flirt with discretion
    Think about what you really want

    Always tell a story with caution
    Both understatements and exaggerations are technically lies

    Always argue with dignity
    You have a right to stand up for what you believe in, but your goal should not be to deal low blows

    Always eat without thoughts of society affecting your diet
    If you want the cake then eat it, but donít just eat it because you can

    Always compete as if you were your own competitor
    Winning without personal growth is not winning at all




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      This is a thoughtful piece that could be used to prompt great conversations. The use of "always" is a statisfying consistency...like a refrain.
    | Posted on 2011-10-27 00:00:00 | by EW61 | [ Reply to This ]


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