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Always run with your head thrown forward
Never look back
Always think with your mind wide open.
Give every thought an equal chance
Always talk with your heart in communication with your head
Allow for a balance of emotion and logic- too much of one or the other, and youíll get yourself in a real mess
Always kiss with passion or never kiss at all
Love should be given in full and not used to tease like a carrot dangling in front of a starving horse
Always pray with sincerity
Itís a waste of words if you donít believe anything will come of it
Always dance with common sense.
Have fun but ask yourself what or who you are really dancing for
Always smile with all your effort
Your cheeks should ache by the end of each day
Always behave as you think you should
Remember the lemmings
Always flirt with discretion
Think about what you really want
Always tell a story with caution
Both understatements and exaggerations are technically lies
Always argue with dignity
You have a right to stand up for what you believe in, but your goal should not be to deal low blows
Always eat without thoughts of society affecting your diet
If you want the cake then eat it, but donít just eat it because you can
Always compete as if you were your own competitor
Winning without personal growth is not winning at all
Submitted on 2011-10-27 16:38:37
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This is a thoughtful piece that could be used to prompt great conversations. The use of "always" is a statisfying consistency...like a refrain.
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