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    dots Submission Name: Warningdots
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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 524
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       The Wisewoman warned me. I didn't listen. Now I am dealing with the aftermath many, many years later


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    Keep your distance
    Lock the door
    This Karma call
    Best to ignore

    With Eagle eye
    He finds his prey
    This Mastermind
    Controls his game

    You'll rue the day
    You let him in
    He cased your soul
    He vowed to win

    Sets his mark
    Sharp shooter plays
    Narcissist, pretender
    Lays ...

    His trap
    a slithering disguise
    He'll lure you in
    He will despise...

    You
    His object of desire
    He'll consume, abuse
    Condemn to fire

    Then dance freely
    As you writhe
    His anger lust
    Now satisfied







    Submitted on 2011-10-27 20:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very powerful piece. The clipped statements serve to create an almost dark, suspenseful tone that gave me that creepy "you better watch out" or "someone is watching" feeling. The Eagle eye/ prey and Mastermind/ game lines are also very clever and fit the piece well. Overall, I love it.
    | Posted on 2011-10-28 00:00:00 | by smartblond | [ Reply to This ]


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