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    dots Submission Name: Dying Sundots

    Author: eden1931
    ASL Info:    18, Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0/2/10
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDying Sundots

    Summer comes and Summer goes
    Fall sets in with the dying of the leaves
    And the mother mourns
    For her son is dying with the dying of the leaves

    Fall comes and Fall goes
    Winter sets in as the cold wind blows
    And the mother is crying crystalline tears of snow
    For her son is gone

    Winter comes and Winter goes
    Spring sets in with the gentle morning dew
    The mother rejoices
    The son is born again like the grass renewed

    Spring comes and Spring goes
    Summer sets in with all the strength the sun can give
    And the mother watches
    As her son grows with the strength the sun, his father, gives him

    Summer comes and Summer goes
    Fall is setting in
    As the mother mourns
    And as her son closes his eyes once more

    Submitted on 2011-10-31 12:17:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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