silence

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silence

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I'll show you my heart if you show me yours. Everythings fragile in this state and i wonder if one sided love is better than none. My heart feels unopened until i'm around you.... and theres so many things left unsaid in glances and gaurded conversations. unrequited love, alone a place ive lived since i've met you. We are two hearts aching to be together, and the only thing between us is the silence in our words...

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And the words will never be mine to hold like your hand under moon lit skies Peace comes yeah it comes after too much bourbon And what I'd like to forget are the miles spanning the distance but what escapes me is the sweet softness of your voice And I would help you face your oldest of demons but you were never mine to save And I can longer find the strength to stand Love carries on always even when silence is all we share Love carries on always when you close your eyes remember theres no other place I'll dream I could be

| Posted on 2012-01-09 00:00:00 | by Mithrandir | [ Reply to This ]

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