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Author: purplesun24
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I'll show you my heart
if you show me yours.
Everythings fragile in this state
and i wonder if one sided love
is better than none.
My heart feels unopened
until i'm around you....
and theres so many things left unsaid
in glances
and gaurded conversations.
unrequited love,
alone a place
ive lived
since i've met you.
We are
two hearts
aching to be together,
and the only thing between us
is the silence in our words...

Submitted on 2011-10-31 20:56:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  And the words
will never be mine to hold
like your hand under moon lit skies

Peace comes
yeah it comes after
too much bourbon

And what I'd like to forget
are the miles spanning the distance
but what escapes me

is the sweet softness
of your voice

And I would help you face
your oldest of demons
but you were never mine
to save

And I can longer find the strength to stand

Love carries on always
even when silence is all we share
Love carries on always
when you close your eyes

theres no other place
I'll dream I could be
| Posted on 2012-01-09 00:00:00 | by Mithrandir | [ Reply to This ]

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