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    dots Submission Name: silencedots
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    Author: purplesun24
    Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 1139/1171/167
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotssilencedots
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    I'll show you my heart
    if you show me yours.
    Everythings fragile in this state
    and i wonder if one sided love
    is better than none.
    My heart feels unopened
    until i'm around you....
    and theres so many things left unsaid
    in glances
    and gaurded conversations.
    unrequited love,
    alone a place
    ive lived
    since i've met you.
    We are
    two hearts
    aching to be together,
    and the only thing between us
    is the silence in our words...




    Submitted on 2011-10-31 20:56:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And the words
    will never be mine to hold
    like your hand under moon lit skies

    Peace comes
    yeah it comes after
    too much bourbon

    And what I'd like to forget
    are the miles spanning the distance
    but what escapes me

    is the sweet softness
    of your voice

    And I would help you face
    your oldest of demons
    but you were never mine
    to save

    And I can longer find the strength to stand

    Love carries on always
    even when silence is all we share
    Love carries on always
    when you close your eyes
    remember

    theres no other place
    I'll dream I could be
    | Posted on 2012-01-09 00:00:00 | by Mithrandir | [ Reply to This ]


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